Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Отвечайте прямо на вопрос, не повторяя его. Дайте тему предложения (например, «Да, у меня был велосипед») и добавьте 1–2 конкретных подробностей: какой это был велосипед, кто подарил, как часто вы ездили. Используйте связки (for example, when, because) и избегайте лишних слов. Ограничьте ответ до 3–4 предложений.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday. I used to ride it to the park almost every afternoon because I loved being outdoors and playing with my friends.

提案: Дайте прямой ответ и расширьте его связным объяснением. Исправьте грамматические ошибки (например, «bicycles are popular»). Добавьте конкретные причины или примеры (погода, инфраструктура, культуру), используя связки (because, however, for example). Держите ответ в 2–4 предложениях и используйте более точную лексику.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in larger cities. For example, many people use them for short trips because new cycle lanes make commuting easier, although usage drops in winter due to the cold and snow.

× Yeah, I live in Russia and bikes popular in my country.

✓ Yeah, I live in Russia and bikes are popular in my country.

The sentence is missing the verb 'are' to form the present simple passive/state description: 'bikes are popular'. Without 'are' the clause is a fragment. Use the present simple 'are' because the subject 'bikes' is plural and you are stating a general fact. Suggestion: always include the appropriate form of 'be' (am/is/are) with adjectives describing a subject, e.g., 'Cars are expensive here.'