Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你没有直接回答考官的问题，而是重复了对方的话。要直接给出主题句，随后用一到两句补充细节并使用连词使表达连贯。例如说明是否有自行车、什么时候开始、有何记忆或用途。回答总句数不超过5句。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about seven. It was a small red bicycle that I used to ride to my friend’s house every weekend, and I remember learning to balance on it in my backyard.

提案: 你再次只是重复了问题，未给出任何信息。应该直接表达观点作为主题句，然后用具体原因或例子支持观点，并使用连词（for example, because, so）使逻辑清晰。控制在最多5句内。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities you can see bike-sharing schemes and dedicated bike lanes that make cycling convenient and safe.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

该句为正确的过去时一般疑问句，结构和时态都符合，无需修改。

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

该句为正确的一般现在时疑问句，主语、时态和谓语使用均正确，无需修改。