Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct, natural answer (topic sentence) and one or two short supporting details. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences) and use linking words if you add details. For example, say whether you had a bike, describe it briefly, and mention how often you used it or a memory.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bicycle with training wheels, and I used it almost every day after school. Because it was close to my home, I often rode around the neighbourhood with my friends.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains errors. Start with a clear opinion (Yes/No/To some extent), then give specific supporting details and use a linking word. Be careful with grammar and number agreement. Keep it natural and concise.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For instance, many people use bicycles for short commutes because they are cheaper and faster in heavy traffic, and bike-sharing schemes have become common in recent years.

× S18 in my country several people used to ride a bike.

✓ In my country, many people used to ride bikes.

The original sentence has extra token 'S18' (likely a label) and incorrect word order and article/number agreement. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) and also relates to singular/plural (ID 1) and article use (ID 22). I corrected by removing 'S18', placing the time/setting phrase 'In my country' at the beginning with a comma, using 'many' as an appropriate quantifier, and making 'bikes' plural to match 'many people' and natural usage. Suggestion: remove extraneous labels, put introductory phrases at the sentence start for clarity, use quantifiers like many/few/multiple, and ensure noun number matches the subject (people → bikes).