Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện ngữ pháp thì quá khứ (sử dụng 'had' và 'was'), chia động từ phù hợp, loại bỏ từ thừa và sửa lỗi giới từ; mở rộng câu bằng một câu bổ trợ cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ: nói rõ thời gian, mô tả nơi chốn và một kỷ niệm ngắn hoặc lý do tại sao bạn thường luyện tập ở công viên.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was eight years old. I often rode it in the local park to improve my balance and confidence, and I remember practicing every Saturday morning with my older brother.

提案: Cải thiện tính tự nhiên bằng cách dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn, tránh dùng 'can' sai ngữ cảnh; dùng linking words để mở rộng (e.g., 'for example', 'such as') và đưa thêm một so sánh hoặc lý do cụ thể về mức độ phổ biến của xe đạp.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people enjoy outdoor exercise. For example, some people get up as early as 5:00 AM to go cycling, running or walking, especially in parks and along riverside paths.

× Yes, I have a bike when I am 8 years old.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was 8 years old.

The sentence mixes present tense verbs (have, am) with a past time reference (when I was 8 years old). Use past tense for both the main verb and the verb 'to be' to match the past time frame: 'had' and 'was'. Suggestion: Use past tense consistently when talking about a past period, e.g., 'I had a bike when I was 8.'

× I usually ride my bike on the park to practice my my skill.

✓ I usually ride my bike in the park to practice my skills.

Incorrect preposition 'on' should be 'in' for locations like 'the park'. Also 'my my skill' repeats 'my' and singular 'skill' is awkward; plural 'skills' is more natural for general practice. Suggestion: Use 'in the park' for being inside a park and pluralize 'skills' when speaking generally; remove duplicate words.

× Yes, in my country people like sports.

✓ Yes, in my country people like sports.

The sentence is grammatically correct and uses present simple appropriately to express a general truth. No correction needed.

× They can wake up at 5:00 AM to do exercise, example riding the bike, walking or running.

✓ They can wake up at 5:00 AM to exercise, for example riding a bike, walking, or running.

The phrase 'to do exercise' is acceptable but 'to exercise' is more natural; 'example' should be 'for example' and 'riding the bike' should be 'riding a bike' or 'riding bikes' in this general context. Also items in a list need commas. Suggestion: Use 'for example' before examples and use 'a bike' rather than 'the bike' when referring generally.