Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “No, I didn’t have a bike.”) then briefly explain why with specific details and linking words. Avoid errors such as “any” instead of “a” and unnecessary hesitations. Keep it to 1–3 short sentences: statement + brief reason.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. At that time my family couldn’t afford one, so I usually walked to school or used public transport.

提案: Give a clear opinion, use correct grammar and more precise vocabulary, and add a specific reason or example with linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g. “destination” twice) and grammar errors (article use, verb forms). Keep to 2–4 sentences: opinion + 1–2 specific reasons or an example using linking words like “because” or “for example.”

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or the market since they save time in heavy traffic and are low-cost to maintain.

× No, I had any bike because that time I was not able to uh buy this type of things.

✓ No, I didn't have any bike because at that time I was not able to buy these kinds of things.

Errors: 'had any bike' is incorrect for negative past; use auxiliary did not + base verb -> 'didn't have any bike' (related to Past tense issue and Sentence structure but matches Singular and plural because 'bike' singular is acceptable with 'any' but overall correction uses 'any' with 'bike' is okay). 'that time' should be 'at that time' (preposition error). 'uh' should be removed in written answer. 'this type of things' is incorrect; use 'these kinds of things' or 'this type of thing'. Suggestion: use 'didn't have any bike' or better 'didn't have a bike' and 'at that time I couldn't afford these kinds of things'.

× From my perspective, I believe that a bike is important in my country because it is a easy way to ride in your destination and it also have save your time and it's also a very good choice for destination.

✓ From my perspective, I believe that bikes are important in my country because they are an easy way to travel to your destination, they also save your time, and they are a very good choice for getting around.

Multiple errors corrected: 'a bike is important' -> plural 'bikes are important' to talk generally about the category (Singular and plural issue). 'it is a easy' -> 'they are an easy' (article and adjective: 'an' before vowel sound and plural agreement). 'way to ride in your destination' -> 'way to travel to your destination' (preposition and verb choice). 'it also have save your time' -> 'they also save your time' (subject-verb agreement and verb form: 'have save' incorrect; use simple present 'save'). 'it's also a very good choice for destination' -> 'they are a very good choice for getting around' (article and preposition). Suggestions: use plural when speaking generally about objects, match subject and verb number, use 'an' before vowel sounds, use 'travel' rather than 'ride in', and use correct prepositions 'to your destination'.