Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: The student repeated the examiner's question instead of giving an answer. For full marks, respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep responses natural, concise (max 5 sentences), and relevant vocabulary (e.g., 'bike,' 'ride,' 'neighborhood,' 'learned').

例: Yes, I had a small blue bicycle when I was about six. It had training wheels at first, but I learned to ride without them within a few weeks, and I often rode around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: Again the student repeated the question instead of answering. Answer directly with your opinion, then support it with one or two specific reasons or examples linked by words such as 'because' or 'for example.' Use appropriate vocabulary like 'commute,' 'recreational,' or 'environmentally friendly.'

例: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country because many people use them to commute short distances. For example, in cities you can see commuters cycling to work, and at weekends families often ride in parks for exercise.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply simply repeated the examiner's question, which is not a proper answer. This is a sentence structure/response error (ID 26) because the sentence lacks a subject and a finite verb that indicate the student's experience. The corrected sentence uses past tense 'had' to match the past-time reference 'when you were a child' and includes the subject 'I' to form a complete declarative answer. Suggestion: when answering yes/no questions about past experiences, use a short answer ('Yes, I did') or a full sentence with past tense ('Yes, I had a bike when I was a child').

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student again repeated the examiner's question instead of answering, which is a sentence structure/response error (ID 26). The corrected sentence provides a direct answer matching the present-tense question 'Do you think...?' by using 'I think' and the adjective 'popular'. Suggestion: when a question asks for an opinion in present tense, respond with 'Yes/No, I think...' or a full opinion sentence in present tense ('I think bikes are popular in my country because...').