Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 응시자의 답변은 질문과 관련이 없어 점수가 매우 낮습니다. 우선 질문에 직접 답하는 주제문(예: 'Yes, I did' 또는 'No, I didn't')을 말하세요. 그 다음 간단한 이유나 세부사항을 덧붙여야 합니다(예: 누가 사주었는지, 얼마나 자주 탔는지, 특별한 기억 등). 답은 자연스럽고 간결해야 하며 문장 수는 최대 5문장으로 제한하세요. 또한 표현 중 'I want to quit this test'와 같은 문구는 상황에 적절치 않으므로 피하세요.

例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to the park every afternoon. I remember learning to balance with my father's help, which made me feel very proud. Riding my bike was one of my favorite activities because it made me feel free.

提案: 답변이 질문과 무관하여 매우 낮은 점수입니다. 질문에는 의견을 직접 제시해야 합니다(예: 'Yes, they are popular' 또는 'No, not so much'). 그런 다음 이유와 구체적인 예를 덧붙여 의견을 뒷받침하세요(예: 교통 혼잡, 환경 의식 증가, 자전거 도로 확충 등). 링크워드(‘because’, ‘for example’, ‘however’)를 사용해 문장을 논리적으로 연결하세요. 불필요한 개인사정이나 시험 포기/유지와 관련된 문장은 피하세요.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in urban areas. This is because many people use them to avoid traffic and save money on transportation. For example, cities have been building more bike lanes and rental services, which has encouraged more commuters to cycle. However, cycling is less common in rural areas where distances are longer.

× I want to quit this test.

✓ I want to stop this test.

The sentence is grammatically correct but uses quit which is acceptable; however, 'stop' is more natural in this context. No specific error from the provided list applies.

× I want to keep this test because I have account for IELTS speaking application.

✓ I want to continue this test because I have an account for the IELTS speaking application.

Article errors (ID 22): The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'an' before 'account' and the definite article 'the' before 'IELTS speaking application' is needed for specificity. Also 'keep this test' is unnatural; 'continue this test' is more appropriate. Suggestion: use 'an account' for singular countable nouns and 'the' when referring to a specific application. Ensure verb choice fits context ('continue' rather than 'keep').