Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar, verb tense and vocabulary accuracy; organize answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details using linking words. Use past tense for childhood events, correct nouns (bike, tricycle) and avoid repetition. Keep response to under five sentences.

例: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child. At first my parents bought me a small pink tricycle, and later I moved on to a two-wheel bicycle once I learned to balance. I loved riding it around the neighborhood because it made me feel independent.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and avoid repetitions. Mention examples of who uses bikes and why to make the answer more specific.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, many people use bikes for commuting to work and school because they are cheap and convenient; moreover, they are useful in crowded cities where traffic is heavy.

× 'Yes I have a buy one when I was young my parents bought me the pink one in the beginning.'

✓ 'Yes, I bought one when I was young; my parents bought me a pink one at first.'

'Past tense issue (ID 5): The student mixes present tense "have" with past reference "when I was young." Use simple past "bought" for completed actions in the past. Also corrected article use and word order: "a pink one" instead of "the pink one" and "at first" instead of "in the beginning" for natural phrasing.'

× 'I have a buy with four wheel because I can like 2 wheel bicycle.'

✓ 'I had a four-wheeled bike because I couldn't ride a two-wheeled bicycle.'

'Singular and plural issue (ID 1) and related tense/word-form problems: "wheel" should be plural "wheels" and combined as the adjective "four-wheeled." Also the original used present tense "have" but the context is past, so change to "had" (past tense). "Because I can like 2 wheel bicycle" is ungrammatical; corrected to "because I couldn't ride a two-wheeled bicycle," which correctly expresses inability in the past and uses hyphenated adjective "two-wheeled." Use numerals written as words in speech contexts.'

× 'Yes, I think it's very popular people in in my country.'

✓ 'Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country.'

'Present tense issue (ID 6) and sentence structure: The original repeats words and omits the subject for "popular." Use "bicycles are very popular" to match present-tense general statement and correct subject-verb order. Removed duplicated "in." '},{