Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no + brief detail), then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural, concise (no more than 5 sentences), and specific (age, how often, who with).

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was eight, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day. Because my parents lived near a park, I often practised there with my friends, which helped me become confident on two wheels.

提案: Your answer is off-topic and contains grammatical errors. Focus on answering the question about bikes, start with a clear opinion, then support it with reasons and examples using linking words (for example, because, however, therefore). Use correct subject-verb agreement and concise language.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient, and several cities now have bike lanes and rental schemes which encourage cycling.

× They thinks bags are popular in your country.

✓ They think bikes are popular in my country.

The subject 'They' is plural, so the verb should be the base form 'think' not 'thinks' (third person singular). Also the student repeated the examiner's question incorrectly: 'bags' and 'in your country' should match the question 'bikes' and the student's perspective 'my country'. Suggestion: use correct subject-verb agreement and ensure vocabulary and pronouns match the context: 'They think bikes are popular in my country.'