Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cümlede zaman uyumsuzluğu ve yanlış fiil kullanımı var; ayrıca yanıt çok kısa ve detay yok. İlk cümlede geçmiş zamanı doğru kullanın (I had). Sonra kısa destekleyici detay ekleyin: nerede kullandığınız, kimden aldığınız veya en sevdiğiniz anınızı belirtin. Bağlaçlarla (because, so, and) akışı sağlayın ve 3-4 cümleyi geçmeyin.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it to ride to my friend’s house every afternoon because our neighborhood was safe. It was a red bicycle that my parents bought for my seventh birthday, and I remember feeling very proud when I learned to ride without training wheels.

提案: Soruyu yanlış anladınız ve ‘banks’ (bankalar) kelimesi kullanılmış; ayrıca belirsiz ve kısa cevap vermişsiniz. Önce doğrudan görüşünüzü söyleyin (Yes/No/Somewhat), sonra nedenlerini ve örnekleri verin. Geçiş ifadeleri (however, for example, because) kullanarak mantıklı bir yapı kurun. Ayrıca bağlam için şehir vs. kırsal farkını belirtebilirsiniz.

例: I think bicycles are quite popular in some parts of my country, especially in smaller towns and among students. For example, in the city center many people use bikes to avoid traffic, but in rural areas cars are more common because distances are longer. Overall, cycling is becoming more popular due to rising fuel costs and new bike lanes being built.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student uses present tense 'have' while referring to a past time 'when I was a child'. Use the past simple 'had' to match the past context. Suggestion: use past tense verbs for actions or possessions that occurred in the past (e.g., 'I had', 'I lived', 'I saw').

× I don't know. I think banks are not popular in my country.

✓ I don't know. I think bikes are not popular in my country.

The student likely meant 'bikes' but wrote 'banks', which is a word choice error rather than a grammatical tense or agreement issue. Replace the incorrect word to match the question about bikes. Suggestion: listen carefully to the question and choose the relevant noun; if unsure, repeat the word in your head to avoid confusion.