Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更直接并注意时态和连贯性。可以先用主题句直接回答，然后用一两句具体细节支持。注意句子之间用连接词分隔，动词时态一致（过去时）。避免冗长或语法错误。

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I wasn't very athletic, so I preferred staying indoors and doing handicrafts or reading. For example, I used to make paper models and read picture books almost every afternoon.

提案: 回答要结构清晰并注意事实表达的准确性与语法（主谓一致和数字表达）。可以先给出直接意见，再用两个具体例子支持，并使用连接词使逻辑更顺畅。避免绝对化表述或未确认的数据。

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For instance, shared rental bikes are available on almost every street, and many people use them for short trips to work or to buy groceries. In addition, China is a major manufacturer of bicycles, which makes them affordable and widely available.

× No, I didn't have a bike. I wasn't that athletic when I was a very young child instead I spent most of my time inside and do some handcrafts or reading.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike. I wasn't that athletic when I was a very young child. Instead, I spent most of my time inside doing some handcrafts or reading.

问题类型：现在分词/动词 + -ing 形式 (与句子时态和动词形式搭配错误)。句中“do some handcrafts”与前面的过去时“I spent most of my time”不一致，习惯用法应使用动名词结构“doing”。另外句子缺少连接标点，应把两个分句用句号或分号分开并在“Instead”后加逗号，读起来更自然。改进建议：当动词作介词 spend 的宾语时，使用动名词（doing）；注意用标点把独立句分开并使用大写开头。

× Yes, of course you can see the rental bikes everywhere in China and as a matter of fact the eighty percent of bikes around the world was made in China, so of course it's popular in China.

✓ Yes, of course you can see rental bikes everywhere in China, and as a matter of fact eighty percent of the bikes around the world are made in China, so of course they're popular in China.

问题类型：主谓一致 / 现在时态 (Subject-verb agreement and present tense)。原句“the eighty percent of bikes around the world was made”中主语是复数（percent of the bikes），谓语应使用复数形式“are made”。同时不需要定冠词放在“rental bikes”前的“the”，以及后半句“it's popular”指代复数时应使用“they're”。改进建议：当主语为复数时使用复数动词（are），注意代词与其所指名词在数上一致；去掉不必要的定冠词或放置正确位置（eighty percent of the bikes）。