Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise, avoid repetition, and organise your answer with a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details. Use linking words (e.g., "so," "therefore," "because") to show cause and effect, and correct small grammar issues (e.g., "everyday" -> "every day").

例: I didn't own a bike as a child, but I often borrowed a neighbour's. Because I practised on it every day, I quickly learned how to ride and became confident cycling on the streets.

提案: Make your answer more coherent and grammatical: start with a clear opinion sentence, then give two specific reasons with linking words. Remove hesitations and repetitions, and finish the thought (avoid trailing off). Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "tropical climate," "affordable," "convenient").

例: Yes, I believe bikes are quite popular in my country. Firstly, the tropical climate allows people to cycle year-round, and secondly, bicycles are an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances in crowded cities.

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I used to borrow one of one of the neighborhood bikes and I got to use it and practice mostly everyday and that's how I got to know how to ride a bike.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I used to borrow one of the neighborhood bikes, and I got to use it and practice mostly every day; that's how I learned to ride a bike.

Multiple past-tense related issues: 'one of one of' is a repetition/typo; 'everyday' (adjective) should be two words 'every day' when meaning each day; 'got to know how to ride' is awkward and non-idiomatic in past context — use 'learned to ride'. Also add a comma and semicolon for clarity and correct clause connection. Suggestion: remove repeated words, use 'every day' for frequency, and use 'learned' for acquiring a skill in the past.

× I think bikes are popular in our country because it's Tropic, tropical climate here.

✓ I think bikes are popular in our country because we have a tropical climate here.

'It's Tropic, tropical climate here' is ungrammatical and misuses noun/adjective forms. Use 'we have a tropical climate' or 'it is tropical here'. 'Tropic' is a noun referring to regions; the adjective 'tropical' is correct. Suggestion: use the adjective 'tropical' and a correct clause structure: 'we have a tropical climate' or 'it is tropical here.'

× And I think people are usually prefer to use it as a as a mode of transportation because it's accessible and and efficient in some way because we.

✓ And I think people usually prefer to use them as a mode of transportation because they are accessible and efficient in some ways.

Pronoun and agreement errors: 'people are usually prefer' mixes auxiliary 'are' with main verb 'prefer' incorrectly — remove 'are'. 'Use it' incorrectly refers to 'bikes' (plural) so use 'them'. Duplicate 'as a as a' is a typo. 'It's accessible and and efficient' uses 'it's' (singular) and double 'and' — should be plural 'they are' or rephrase. The trailing 'because we.' is incomplete; remove or complete; here rephrased to 'because they are accessible and efficient in some ways.' Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, match pronouns to nouns, remove duplicates, and complete clauses.