Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Jawaban ini tidak alami dan ada kesalahan kosakata serta tata bahasa. Gunakan kalimat topik langsung (mis. Yes, I had a bike) dan tambahkan 1–2 kalimat pendukung yang spesifik, seperti kapan Anda mendapatkannya, siapa yang memberinya, atau bagaimana Anda menggunakannya. Jangan lebih dari 5 kalimat dan gunakan kata penghubung sederhana jika perlu (e.g. "because", "so", "and").

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. My parents bought it for me on my seventh birthday, and I rode it to school and to the park every day because it was my main way to get around.

提案: Jawaban ini tidak jelas dan mengandung kesalahan kata (bags) serta struktur negatif yang kurang tepat. Berikan pernyataan langsung tentang popularitas sepeda, lalu jelaskan alasan dengan detail spesifik atau perbandingan (mis. infrastructure, weather, car ownership). Gunakan penghubung seperti "because" atau "however" untuk koherensi. Jangan gunakan kata yang tidak relevan.

例: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. Most people prefer cars because the cities lack safe bike lanes and the distances between places are often long, so cycling is less practical for daily travel.

× Yes, I have a perk.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The student used the wrong noun 'perk' instead of 'bike' and also used present tense 'have' while the question asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so past tense 'had' is required. Suggestion: use the appropriate vocabulary 'bike' and match tense to the question (past simple).

× No, in the country bags not popular.

✓ No, bicycles are not popular in the country.

The original sentence has missing auxiliary verb and wrong noun 'bags' instead of 'bikes', and the word order is incorrect. For negation in present simple we need the auxiliary 'are' plus 'not' (are not), and plural noun 'bicycles' or 'bikes' fits the meaning. Suggestion: use correct subject 'bicycles' and form the negative with 'are not' for present simple.