Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question and did not answer. To improve, give a clear direct answer (yes/no) followed by 1–3 specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural, concise (no more than 5 sentences), and use relevant vocabulary (e.g., bicycle, ride, neighborhood, practice).

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was seven, and I learned to ride it in the park near my house. Because I practiced almost every day, I quickly became confident and started cycling to school with my friends.

提案: Again, you repeated the question instead of answering. To improve, give a clear opinion (yes/no/partly) then provide specific reasons and examples using linking words (for example, because, however, also). Use relevant vocabulary like commuting, bike lanes, cycling culture. Keep answers natural and under five sentences.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For instance, many people use bikes to commute short distances because there are dedicated bike lanes and it is faster than walking. However, cycling is less common in rural areas where public transport is limited.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) because the reply lacks an appropriate verb phrase answering the past simple question. Correct response uses past simple 'had' to match the question's past tense and adds a subject 'I' and auxiliary 'Yes' for a natural short answer. Suggestion: answer with a full sentence using past simple (e.g., 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.').

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student's reply repeats the examiner's question rather than providing an answer. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) because it fails to assert a stance. Correct response maintains present simple 'think' to match the question's present tense and includes a subject 'I' plus a simple opinion. Suggestion: give a direct answer using present simple (e.g., 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' or 'No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country.').