Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, answer directly with a topic sentence, add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word, and keep it concise (no more than 5 sentences). For example, say whether you had a bike, mention an age or memory, and explain why it mattered to you.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about seven years old. In fact, I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park, which helped me gain confidence and independence. Because my parents lived nearby, I often rode to visit friends or go to school, so the bike was very useful.

提案: Your answer is direct but very brief and slightly repetitive. To improve, keep the topic sentence, then add a specific reason or example with a linking word (for example, because/so) and perhaps a comparison or brief consequence. Use a wider range of vocabulary (e.g., common, prevalent, public transport) and avoid repeating phrases.

例: No, bicycles are not very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or buses for convenience. For example, cities have heavy traffic and limited bike lanes, so many families choose motor vehicles instead. As a result, cycling is more common as a leisure activity than as a daily mode of transport.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I did.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of giving an answer. This is a sentence structure/response error (type 26). Provide a short, direct answer appropriate to the past-tense question. Use 'Yes, I did.' or 'No, I didn't.' followed by details if needed.

× No, bikes are not popular in my country. In my country they use mostly car or bus.

✓ No, bicycles are not very popular in my country. People in my country mostly use cars or buses.

There are multiple issues: the vague noun 'bikes' is acceptable but 'bicycles' is more formal; 'they use mostly car or bus' has article and number errors. 'Car' and 'bus' should be plural when speaking generally ('cars or buses') and the definite/indefinite article is not needed. Also 'they' is vague; 'People' is clearer. This combines article errors (type 22) and singular/plural agreement (type 1). Suggest using 'people' + plural vehicle nouns and placing 'mostly' before the verb phrase for natural word order.