Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid unnecessary articles and word order errors (e.g., say “I had a bike” not “I had the bike”). You can briefly mention when or why you had it and a simple memory to enrich the answer.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. For example, I got it when I was seven and rode it to school every day. Because the neighborhood was safe, I spent a lot of time practicing tricks with my friends.

提案: Answer directly and provide clear, grammatical supporting reasons using linking words. Correct common grammar errors (say “there are no bicycle lanes” and “many people don’t like to cycle”). Give a specific reason and an example or brief consequence to show development.

例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because there are few bicycle lanes and traffic is unsafe. As a result, many people prefer cars or motorbikes; for example, my neighbors drive to work instead of cycling because they worry about accidents.

× Yes, I had the bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Singular and plural issue: 'the bike' implies a specific bike already known, but the question asks generally if the student had any bike as a child. Using the indefinite article 'a' is correct. Suggestion: use 'a bike' to indicate one nonspecific bike. Grammar problem type ID:1

× No, I don't think so, because my country it's there's no bicycle roads in my country.

✓ No, I don't think so, because in my country there are no bicycle lanes.

There be issue: original has redundant and incorrect forms 'my country it's there's' and uses 'bicycle roads' which is unnatural. Use the construction 'there are no' for plural noun 'bicycle lanes' and place the location phrase 'in my country' at the beginning. Suggestion: say 'in my country there are no bicycle lanes.' Grammar problem type ID:3

× So many people doesn't like to a bicycle.

✓ So many people don't like bicycles.

Subject-verb agreement errors: 'people' is plural so the auxiliary must be 'do not' (don't), not 'doesn't.' Also 'like to a bicycle' is incorrect: use 'like bicycles' or 'like riding bicycles.' Suggestion: use 'don't like bicycles' or 'don't like to ride bicycles.' Grammar problem type ID:27