Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ короткий и грамматически корректный, но слишком краткий. Чтобы набрать больше очков, нужно дать развёрнутый ответ (тематическое предложение + причина или контекст) — не более 3–4 предложений. Используйте связки (for example, because, so) и уточняющие детали. Также можно добавить краткое сравнение с настоящим временем.

例: No, I didn’t. When I was a child my family couldn’t afford a bike, so I usually walked to school. For example, I often went with my friends who lived nearby.

提案: Ответ несвязный и содержит ошибки лексики и структуры. Нужно начать с ясного утверждения, затем привести 1–2 конкретные причины или примера, используя связки (because, for example, however). Избегайте повтора слов и лишних фраз, следите за порядком слов и согласованием времен.

例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because the cities are crowded and people prefer cars or public transport. For example, many streets lack bike lanes, so families usually choose buses or taxis instead.

× No, I don't think because in my country we never have been the bike of biker.

✓ No, I don't think so because in my country we never had many bicycles or many people who ride bikes.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and incorrect verb forms, creating a sentence structure error. 'Don't think because' is incomplete: add 'so' to link to the reason. 'We never have been the bike of biker' is ungrammatical: choose a clear noun phrase and correct past/reference tense. Use 'never had many bicycles' (singular/plural and verb tense) or 'many people who ride bikes'. Ensure logical subject-verb-object order and use appropriate collocations. Suggestion: Break the idea into a clear main clause and a reason clause: 'No, I don't think so because...' then state the reason using correct nouns and verbs. Use 'have' for possession properly (present perfect) or 'had' for past general statement depending on intended meaning.

× We we like our city and our and our grandmother and.

✓ We like our city and our grandmothers.

The original sentence contains repetition ('We we') and incomplete phrases ('our and our grandmother and'), which are sentence structure errors. It is unclear whether the speaker means 'our grandmother' or 'our grandmothers'; plural 'grandmothers' is more natural with 'we'. Remove duplicate words and redundant 'and' and complete the noun phrases. Also ensure parallel structure: 'our city and our grandmothers.' Suggestion: Keep noun phrases parallel and concise. If referring to one grandmother, say 'my grandmother'; for multiple speakers' family members, use 'our grandmothers.'