Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar, pronunciation clarity and coherence. Use correct past tense and simple sentence structures: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, because, so, when). Avoid redundancy and keep answers to maximum five sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood because it made me feel free and relaxed. For example, I often rode to the park after school with my friends, which was fun and healthy.

提案: Improve sentence accuracy and use linking words to organize ideas. Correct vocabulary (bike, driver, cheaper) and use one or two specific reasons with examples. Keep answer concise and natural.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Because people care about the environment and want to save money, many choose cycling instead of driving. For instance, in cities bicycles are common for short commutes and they help reduce traffic and pollution.

× Yes, of course I have a back when I was a child and I love hiking.

✓ Yes, of course I had a bike when I was a child and I loved hiking.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past reference 'when I was a child'; use past tense 'had'. Also 'back' is a spelling error and should be 'bike'. 'Love' describing past context should be 'loved' if referring to that time. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for events in childhood and correct spelling to 'bike'. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I love biking because I free freedom and relax when I riding.

✓ I love biking because it gives me freedom and I relax when I ride.

Several issues: 'free freedom' is incorrect word choice; use 'gives me freedom' or 'feel free'. 'When I riding' has incorrect verb form after 'when' — use base form 'ride' for present simple with 'when' to indicate habitual action. Also add 'it' as subject for 'gives'. Suggestion: Use 'gives me freedom' and 'when I ride' for clarity and correct verb form. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Yes, of course our country is a green country.

✓ Yes, of course, our country is a green country.

This sentence mainly needs commas for natural phrasing; not a major preposition error. No preposition change required; keep structure. Note: This entry included to follow only listed types; minimal change adds commas for fluency. Suggestion: Use commas to separate introductory phrase. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× We prefer to ride than have a driver to to drive a car.

✓ We prefer riding to having a driver drive a car.

Comparative structure 'prefer X to Y' requires gerund forms for parallelism: 'riding' and 'having'. Also remove duplicate 'to'. 'Have a driver to drive' is awkward; 'having a driver drive a car' or 'having someone else drive' is better. Suggestion: Use 'prefer X to Y' with parallel gerunds. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× So I think back is more popular and more economic.

✓ So I think bikes are more popular and more economical.

'singular/plural' and word choice: 'back' is a misspelling of 'bike' and must be plural 'bikes' to match general statement. Adjective 'economic' is incorrect here; use 'economical' to mean cost-saving. Also use 'are' for plural subject. Suggestion: Use plural noun for generalizations and correct adjective form. Grammar problem_type_id: 1