Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Correct grammar and use natural past tense. Start with a clear topic sentence, then briefly explain or give a reason. Keep it under five sentences and avoid repetition.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a small apartment and we usually walked or took the bus, so there wasn’t room to store a bike.

提案: Make the answer more coherent: give a clear topic sentence, then add two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, 'for example' or 'also'). Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement and word choice) and avoid unclear phrases like 'sharing their rights'.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work because they are cheap and convenient, and also a lot of students ride bikes to school or college to save time and money.

× No, I don't have a bike when I were a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The speaker refers to a past time ('when I was a child'), so past tense must be used. 'Don't have' is present tense and 'were' is incorrect for the singular subject 'I' in this context. Use past simple: 'didn't have' for the negative and 'was' for the verb 'to be'. Suggestion: use 'didn't have' with past time markers and use 'was' for 'I' in past statements. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many people's rides a bike for their own jobs.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many people ride bikes for their jobs.

The phrase 'people's rides a bike' contains possessive 'people's' and a singular verb 'rides' that do not agree with the plural subject. The correct plural subject is 'many people' and the verb should be base form 'ride' after a plural subject. Also 'a bike' after 'many people' is awkward; use plural 'bikes' or no article. Suggestion: use 'many people ride bikes' or 'many people ride a bike' only if referring to each person individually but with correct verb form. Grammar problem type ID:27

× The students, many students ride a bike and go to their school, college and most of the people sharing their rights.

✓ Many students ride bikes and go to school or college, and many people share bicycles.

There are multiple issues: inconsistent pluralization ('a bike' with 'many students'), unnecessary article 'the' before 'students', and unclear phrase 'sharing their rights'. 'Ride a bike' can be changed to 'ride bikes' to match the plural subject. 'Go to their school, college' should be simplified to 'go to school or college'. The final clause 'most of the people sharing their rights' is ungrammatical and unclear; if the intended meaning is that many people share bicycles, use 'many people share bicycles'. Suggestion: keep plurals consistent and simplify the sentence into clear clauses. Grammar problem type ID:1