Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ не соответствует вопросу — вы повторили вопрос вместо того, чтобы отвечать. Постарайтесь давать чёткое прямое утверждение в качестве темы (например, «Да, у меня был велосипед») и затем добавлять 1–2 предложения с деталями (когда, кто дал, как часто ездили). Используйте связки (for example, when, because, so) для логики и естественности. Ограничьтесь максимум 3–4 предложениями.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday. I used to ride it to the park every afternoon with my friends, and it helped me learn to be independent and confident.

提案: Ответ не по теме и неясный — вероятно, вы хотели сказать что-то о безопасности (risk) или о плюсах велосипедов. Нужно прямо ответить на вопрос (Yes/No/Partly), затем пояснить почему с конкретными деталями (например, данные о росте велодорожек, популярность в городах, причины: цена, удобство). Используйте связки (because, however, for example) и не больше 3–4 предложений.

例: Yes, I think bikes are becoming more popular in my country because many cities are building new bike lanes and people want cheaper, healthier transport. For example, commuters often use e-bikes to avoid traffic, and cycling clubs have grown in recent years.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original student response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure and pragmatic error: the response should be a statement answering the past simple question. Use past simple 'had' to match the question's tense and include a subject 'I'. Suggestion: answer directly with a past-tense statement (e.g., 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn\'t have a bike when I was a child.').

× The risk is nice.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

The original sentence 'The risk is nice.' is unrelated to the question and is semantically incorrect. This is a sentence structure and lexical selection error. The examiner asked about the popularity of bikes in the present; use a present-tense statement about general truth: 'bikes are popular' or 'bikes are not very popular.' Suggestion: respond directly to the question and use present simple for general facts (e.g., 'Yes, bikes are popular in my country.' or 'No, bikes are not very popular in my country.').