Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 总体回答自然且直接，有主题句并给出细节。但可以更有效地使用连接词使句子更连贯，并包含更多具体细节（例如年龄、学会骑车的经历或特别的记忆），同时控制在不超过5句内。注意避免简单重复“had a bike”类型的表述。

例: Yes, I did — I had a small red bike that I got when I was about seven. I learned to ride it in my parents’ backyard, and I used to cycle around the neighborhood almost every day with my friends after school. It was my favorite way to explore and I remember racing down the hill near our park.

提案: 回答直接但过于简短，缺乏支持性细节与衔接词。建议给出理由并举例说明（例如城市交通拥堵、天气或自行车道不足），使用连接词如“because”，“however”来组织观点，同时尽量避免绝对化表述（如“no”改为更自然的否定或有条件的回答）。

例: Not really — I think bikes are less popular in big cities because most people prefer public transport due to traffic and limited bike lanes. However, cycling is more common in smaller towns for short trips or leisure, especially on weekends.

× No, because most people use the public transport.

✓ No, because most people use public transport.

句子中“the public transport”使用了不必要的定冠词。英语中谈论公共交通作为一般概念时通常不加“the”，应直接说“public transport”或“public transportation”。建议：作为泛指时去掉定冠词；若指具体的某一套交通系统或特定场所，可使用“the”。