Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is direct and natural, but it is short and lacks specific supporting details and linking words. To improve, add one or two specific details (where you rode, who with, or a memory), use a linking phrase to connect ideas, and keep it under five sentences. This will make your response more engaging and show richer language.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school, and sometimes we would race to the park. Because I practiced every day, I became quite confident riding on busy streets.

提案: Your reply answers the question but is generic and repetitive. Improve by giving specific reasons or examples and using linking words (for example, because, however, therefore). Mention who uses bikes, for what purposes, or any trends to show depth and range of vocabulary.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and practical for short trips. For instance, students and delivery workers often use bicycles to get around quickly, and in some cities there are many bike lanes which encourages people to cycle more.

× Many people ride a bike when they go out.

✓ Many people ride bikes when they go out.

The noun 'bike' should be plural after a plural subject 'many people'. Use the plural form 'bikes' to match the plural quantifier and reflect general habitual action. Suggestion: after words like 'many', use the plural noun (many people ride bikes).