Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答没有真正回答考官的问题。回答应该直接给出主题句（有或没有），然后用一到两句具体细节支持。注意避免重复考官的话，并控制在最多5句内。可以补充年龄、是否常骑、和与谁一起骑等具体信息。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was seven and rode it to school and the park almost every day. My parents taught me to ride, and I often rode with my younger brother on weekends.

提案: 你的回答有主题句，但表达不够清晰，包含语法错误和不连贯的短语，同时细节不够具体。应使用连接词使表达更流畅，提供具体例子（如共享单车、骑行道、通勤比例或政策细节），并把句子控制在最多5句内。注意词汇准确（例如“shared bikes”而不是“EU bike”）。

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country today. For example, many cities have introduced shared bike services and built dedicated bike lanes, which makes cycling convenient and safe. The government also promotes cycling as a green alternative for short commutes, especially in busy urban areas.

× We have the policy of you bike on many corners in one community.

✓ We have a policy of bike-sharing on many corners in each community.

错误：句中未正确使用冠词并且短语结构不自然。应使用不定冠词 a 来引出单一的政策项，同时原句的“you bike”是不符合英语表达的词组，正确表达应为“bike-sharing”或“shared bikes”，并将“one community”改为更自然的“each community”。建议：使用 a/an 引出单一可数名词，使用常见短语 bike-sharing 表达共享单车概念。

× Government encourages people to use EU bike as a substitute transportation because when people drive or ride.

✓ The government encourages people to use shared bikes as an alternative form of transportation because driving or riding (cars) ...

错误：缺少定冠词 the 用于特指政府；‘EU bike’ 不明确且疑似笔误，应为 shared bikes 或 public bikes；‘substitute transportation’ 用词不当，习惯说法为 alternative (form of) transportation；句子结尾不完整（because when people drive or ride.）导致结构不完整。建议：在 government 前加 the，使用 shared bikes 或 public bikes，替换 substitute 为 alternative，并把原因从句补全或改为完整表达，例如“because it reduces traffic and pollution”。