Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Expand the short answer into a complete topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details. Use a linking word if you add details. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences).

例: Yes, I did — I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was about six. It was my favorite toy because it let me explore the neighborhood, and my parents taught me to ride every weekend until I could go without help.

提案: Begin with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add specific supporting details and use linking words (for example, 'for example' or 'because'). Avoid short fragments; combine into coherent sentences and limit to under five sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and practical. For example, many people cycle to work or school to avoid traffic, and in cities with bike lanes commuting is often faster and more convenient than driving.

× Sure, there are many bikes in the street.

✓ Sure, there are many bikes in the streets.

The student used 'in the street' which is less natural when speaking about bikes generally present across an area or city; 'in the streets' (plural) is the usual idiomatic expression to indicate presence throughout streets. Use plural to convey general distribution across many streets. Suggestion: say 'in the streets' when referring to bikes commonly found around town, or 'on the streets' is also acceptable ('on the streets').

× People go to work or school by bike.

✓ People go to work or school by bike.

This sentence is grammatically correct and fits the context and tense. No correction needed. Suggestion: You can also say 'by bicycle' for slightly more formal expression.

× Very convenient.

✓ It is very convenient.

'Very convenient' is a sentence fragment (lacks a subject and finite verb). Adding 'It is' completes the clause and makes a full sentence appropriate in spoken or written English. Suggestion: Use complete sentences: 'It is very convenient.' or link to previous sentence: 'This is very convenient.'