Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答过于简短，缺乏细节和结构化表达。建议：用主题句直接回答后，补充1–2个具体细节（比如什么时候、什么样的自行车、与谁一起骑、为什么喜欢或不喜欢）。使用连接词如“because”、“so”来使句子连贯，控制在最多5句之内。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight, and I often rode it with my neighbor every afternoon because we enjoyed racing around the park.

提案: 回答太简短且没有支持细节。建议：先直接回答，然后用1–2个具体理由或例子支持观点（如通勤、环保意识、城市设施）。使用连接词如“because”、“for example”或“also”以增强连贯性，控制在最多5句。

例: Yes, I do. Bicycles are quite popular because many people use them for short commutes in the city, and there are now more bike lanes, for example near universities and business districts.

× Yes, I did.

✓ Yes, I did.

该回答短句在语法上正确：问题是过去时（Did you have...），用短答“Yes, I did.”正确对应过去时。无需修改。

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I do.

该回答短句在语法上正确：问题是现在时（Do you think...），用短答“Yes, I do.”正确对应现在时。无需修改。