Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct, use correct tense and more natural phrasing, and add one or two specific supporting details. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid repetitions like “of course” used twice. Correct grammar (e.g., past tense: “I had”) and add a brief reason or memory to make the answer more engaging.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bicycle—my favorite color— that my mother bought for my seventh birthday. I used it to ride around our neighborhood every afternoon, and I remember learning to balance on it in the park.

提案: Improve grammar (singular/plural agreement and verb forms), use clearer linking words, and give one or two specific reasons or examples. Organize the answer: state your opinion, then support it with specific reasons such as commuting, exercise, or environment. Keep sentences concise and natural.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in the Philippines. Many people use them for short commutes and weekend trips to nearby hills because cycling is good exercise and cheaper than driving. For example, on weekends I often see groups of cyclists riding to nearby mountains for both fitness and leisure.

× When I was a child, of course I do have a bike, which of course there is a blue color which is my favorite, so my mom brought it for me. That's all.

✓ When I was a child, of course I had a bike; it was blue, which was my favorite, and my mom bought it for me.

The sentence mixes past time reference ('When I was a child') with present tense 'do have' — use simple past 'had' (Present tense issue). Also use past simple 'bought' instead of 'brought' for the intended meaning of purchasing. The phrase 'there is a blue color' is awkward and ungrammatical; use 'it was blue'. Suggestions: keep verb tenses consistent with the past time frame, use 'had' and 'was', and use 'bought' if you mean your mom purchased it.

× In my opinion, yes, bike are popular in my country which is in the Philippines because it gives us the opportunity to do the exercise while going to the mountains as well as it's a good idea of making ourselves keeps busy.

✓ In my opinion, yes, bikes are popular in my country, the Philippines, because they give us the opportunity to exercise while going to the mountains, and they are a good way to keep ourselves busy.

Multiple agreement and word choice issues: 'bike are' should be 'bikes are' (plural noun with plural verb) (Subject-verb agreement errors). 'It gives' should be 'they give' to match plural 'bikes'. 'Do the exercise' is unnatural; use 'exercise'. 'It's a good idea of making ourselves keeps busy' is ungrammatical: use 'they are a good way to keep ourselves busy'. Suggestions: match plural nouns and verbs, choose natural collocations ('exercise', 'a good way to keep busy'), and simplify clause structure for clarity.