Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cần giảm tiếng ngập ngừng và sửa lỗi phát âm/từ vựng (ví dụ: "buy" -> "bike"), đồng thời trả lời rõ ràng với câu chủ đề rồi mở rộng bằng một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể. Hạn chế lặp từ không cần thiết và nói thành câu ngắn gọn (không quá 5 câu). Nên dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để nối ý một cách mạch lạc.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother bought it for me because I loved riding around the neighborhood, and I often cycled to visit my friends on weekends.

提案: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và lựa chọn từ chính xác (ví dụ "buys" -> "bikes", tránh cấu trúc mơ hồ như "it's not push then other countries"). Trả lời cần có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nêu một hoặc hai lý do cụ thể và dùng liên từ (for example, because, so) để làm rõ lập luận. Nên cung cấp ví dụ hoặc so sánh ngắn gọn để câu trả lời cụ thể hơn.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many cities have dedicated bike lanes and commuting by bike is cheap and convenient. For example, students and office workers often cycle short distances instead of taking a car.

× Well, uh, honestly, when I was a child, uh, I had a buy, uh, which is, uh, brought by my mom, uh, because I like uh, cycling, so cycling.

✓ Well, honestly, when I was a child, I had a bike that was bought by my mom because I liked cycling.

The student wrote 'buy' instead of 'bike' (spelling/word choice error) and used awkward passive phrasing 'which is brought by my mom' that doesn't match past time. Also 'I like cycling' should be consistent with the past context, so change to 'I liked cycling'. Suggestion: learn correct spelling 'bike' and match verb tenses (use past tense for past events). Use natural relative clause 'that was bought by my mom' rather than 'which is brought'. Suggested Grammar Problem Type ID: 1 (Singular and plural issue) and 5 (Past tense issue).

× Yes, I think buys are popular in my country because in my country, uh, it's not uh, it's not uh, push then uh, other countries.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because here it is not as crowded as in other countries.

The student used 'buys' instead of 'bikes' (wrong word spelling) and produced an unclear phrase 'it's not push then other countries'. Correct to 'not as crowded as in other countries' to express comparison. Ensure plural 'bikes' for multiple items. Suggestion: use correct noun 'bike' and plural 'bikes' when talking generally; use comparative structure 'not as...as'. Suggested Grammar Problem Type ID: 1 (Singular and plural issue) and 19 (Incorrect comparison object).

× So I think people can uh, cycling in the city.

✓ So I think people can cycle in the city.

After a modal verb like 'can', the base form of the verb should be used, not the -ing form. 'Can cycle' is correct; 'can cycling' is incorrect. Suggestion: after modal verbs (can, may, should) use the base verb (infinitive without to), e.g., 'can cycle'. Suggested Grammar Problem Type ID: 4 (Modal verb usage) and 8 (Verb + -ing form).