Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct response with a topic sentence, then one or two brief supporting details. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences) and use linking words if you add details (for example: "because," "so," "and").

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I learned to ride it in the park. Because the neighborhood was quiet, I rode it almost every day, which helped me become more confident and independent.

提案: Again, you repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a clear opinion first, then support it with a specific reason or example. Use a linking word (for example: "because," "however," "for example") to connect your ideas and keep the answer concise and natural.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and rental schemes, so commuting by bike has become more convenient and common.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure/pragmatic error where a response is required. Provide a complete declarative sentence using past simple 'had' to match the past-time frame 'when you were a child'. Suggestion: respond with 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.' depending on the truth.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure/pragmatic error. To answer a present-opinion question use present simple: 'I think bikes are popular in my country.' If giving a negative opinion use 'No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country.' Ensure you include a subject and verb to form a full sentence.