Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Carefully listen and repeat the examiner's question; correct pronunciation and slight mishearing caused your reply to be a question rather than an answer. Give a direct topic sentence answering (Yes/No) and then add one short supporting detail. Keep it natural, brief (max 5 sentences), and avoid turning the question back. Use linking words if you add details (for example, because/so/and).

例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I received it as a birthday present and learned to ride it in the park near my home, so I spent a lot of time practicing with friends.

提案: Good direct answer and relevant detail, but make it more specific and vary vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to add specific reasons, examples, or comparisons. Avoid vague phrases like "especially around my neighborhood" without explaining why, and consider adding brief statistics or common reasons (health, traffic, cost) to strengthen your response.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and help avoid traffic congestion. For example, in my neighborhood many people cycle to work and some join group rides at night for safety and social reasons.

× Did you have a back when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student wrote 'back' instead of 'bike', which is a wrong lexical choice, not in the provided list exactly. According to the list, the closest applicable category is 'Incorrect use of pronouns' or 'Sentence structure errors', but this is a word choice error. Correction: replace the incorrect word with the intended noun 'bike'. Suggestion: read the question carefully and repeat the key noun to avoid mishearing or typographical mistakes.

× Of course, bikes are popular in my country, especially around my neighborhood.

✓ Of course, bikes are popular in my country, especially around my neighborhood.

This sentence is grammatically correct: plural noun 'bikes' matches the plural verb 'are' and the sentence structure is appropriate for the present tense. No correction is needed. Suggestion: maintain subject-verb agreement and natural word order.

× People often cycle together at night.

✓ People often cycle together at night.

This sentence is grammatically correct: 'People' (plural) with base verb 'cycle' is appropriate, adverb 'often' placed correctly before the verb, and the time expression 'at night' is correct. No correction needed. Suggestion: continue placing frequency adverbs before main verbs for simple present statements.