Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo thay vì trả lời. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó thêm 1-2 câu chi tiết (dùng liên từ như "and" hoặc "so" để nối ý). Tránh lặp lại câu hỏi và giữ tối đa 5 câu.

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was about eight years old. It was a small red bike with training wheels, and my father taught me how to ride it in the park. I used to ride it to visit friends and sometimes to the corner shop, which made me feel independent.

提案: Câu phản hồi của bạn là một phiên bản bị sai của câu hỏi (lỗi phát âm/viết) và không trả lời. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, đưa ý kiến rõ ràng và cung cấp một hoặc hai lý do cụ thể, dùng liên từ (ví dụ "because", "so", "however"). Giữ câu ngắn gọn và tự nhiên.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are still quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. However, in big cities cars and motorbikes are more common due to convenience, so cycling is more popular in smaller towns and among young people.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's repeat of the examiner's question is not an answer; it is a sentence structure/response error. The correct response should provide a short answer plus a past-tense statement. Use 'did' for short past-tense yes/no answers and the past simple 'had' to state possession in the past. Suggestion: answer with 'Yes, I did.' or 'No, I didn't.' followed by a past simple clause like 'I had a bike' or 'I didn't have a bike.'.

× Do you think buys or popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student used 'buys' which is a misspelling/mistyping of 'bikes' and produced an ungrammatical phrase 'or popular'. The correct question needs the plural noun 'bikes' and the auxiliary 'are' for present simple passive/stative with plural subject: 'bikes are popular'. Suggestion: check spelling and ensure you include the correct verb 'are' for plural subjects: 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'. Also be careful to repeat the exact noun from the question ('bikes').