Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn không trả lời câu hỏi. Trong phần thi Speaking Part 1, hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó (nếu cần) bổ sung 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể. Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản nếu thêm chi tiết. Ví dụ các điểm cần nêu: có hay không, khi nào, ai mua, tần suất sử dụng, cảm giác khi đi xe đạp.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I used it almost every day to visit my friends and ride around the neighbourhood. It felt very freeing and helped me become more independent.

提案: Bạn không trả lời câu hỏi. Trả lời trực tiếp với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi đưa ra 1–2 câu hỗ trợ nêu lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể. Sử dụng liên từ như "because", "for example", hoặc "however" để làm rõ ý.</br>Ví dụ các điểm cần nêu: mức độ phổ biến (thường thấy ở thành phố hay nông thôn), lý do (giá rẻ, giao thông, sức khỏe), và một ví dụ cụ thể.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller towns and among students. This is because cycling is inexpensive and practical for short journeys; for example, many university students use bicycles to commute to campus every day.

× Student:

✓ Student: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original response was missing (empty), which is a sentence structure error because there was no verb or subject. Provide a complete past-tense sentence to answer 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' Use 'had' for past possession and include subject 'I' for clarity. Suggestion: Form a full sentence with subject + past tense verb (I + had) and a clear object (a bike).

× Student:

✓ Student: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country.

The original response was missing (empty), which is a sentence structure error and here corrected using the present simple tense to match the question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' Use 'I think' + present simple 'are' for general statements. Suggestion: Use 'I think' followed by a present simple clause (bikes are) to express an opinion about a current general truth.