Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise, use correct tense and grammar, and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by 1–2 specific supporting details. Avoid repeating the same idea (bike vs bicycle) and reduce redundancy. Use linking words (for example, because, so, and) to make the response coherent. Aim for natural phrasing and correct verb forms.

例: I didn’t have a motorbike as a child, but I did have a bicycle. I used it to ride from home to school every day, and I also cycled to the market to buy small items, so it was both convenient and enjoyable.

提案: Start with a clear direct answer, then provide specific reasons using correct vocabulary and grammar. Avoid filler words (uh) and unclear phrases ("easy to face"). Use linking words (for example, because, therefore, however) and give 1–2 concrete reasons or examples to support your opinion.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and easy to park in crowded cities. For example, many people prefer motorcycles for short commutes and running errands, especially where traffic and parking are difficult.

× Well, I do not have a bike when I was a child, but I had a bicycle when I was a child.

✓ I did not have a bike when I was a child, but I had a bicycle then.

The sentence incorrectly mixes present tense 'do not have' with past time phrase 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'did not have' to match the time reference. Also 'when I was a child' is repeated; replace the second occurrence with 'then' for conciseness. Suggestion: keep verb tense consistent with time expressions (use past simple for completed past events).

× I love bicycle because that time I was taking a ride from my home to school and always bought a lot of things from market.

✓ I loved bicycles because at that time I used to ride from my home to school and always bought a lot of things from the market.

Several issues: 'love' is present while referring to past; change to 'loved'. 'bicycle' should be plural 'bicycles' or 'my bicycle' depending on meaning; 'bicycles' fits general statement. 'that time' is better as 'at that time'. 'I was taking a ride' is awkward; use 'used to ride' to express habitual past action. 'from market' needs the definite article 'the market'. Suggestions: use 'used to' for past habits, ensure correct noun number, and include articles before specific places ('the market').

× Exactly, buy car too popular in our country because mostly uh people are using bike because it's very easy to face.

✓ Yes, buying cars is also very popular in our country because many people use bikes since they are very easy to use.

Original sentence has multiple structure errors: 'buy car too popular' lacks a verb form—use gerund 'buying cars' or 'buying cars is'. 'too' is misused; use 'also' or 'as well'. 'mostly uh people' should be 'many people' or 'most people' without filler 'uh'. 'are using bike' needs plural 'bikes' and present simple 'use' for general fact. 'easy to face' is incorrect collocation; likely intended 'easy to use' or 'easy to handle'. Suggestions: use gerund+noun with linking verb ('Buying cars is...'), choose 'also' for addition, correct noun plurality, and use appropriate collocations ('easy to use').