Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a grammatically correct direct answer and add a brief supporting detail. Use past tense for past events, and avoid one-word replies. Keep it natural and concise (1–3 sentences).

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I learned to ride it in the park near my house.

提案: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles), and provide specific supporting details with linking words. Limit to up to five sentences and be coherent. For example, contrast groups using linking words like 'however' or 'while', and give a reason or example.

例: I think bicycles are more popular among children than adults in my country. For example, many children ride bikes to play and go to school, while adults usually prefer cars or motorcycles because they are faster and more practical for work.

× I don't have a bike.

✓ I didn't have a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. 'Don't have' is present simple; change to 'didn't have' (past simple negative) to match the timeframe. Suggestion: use past simple for habits or possessions in the past (e.g., 'I didn't have...', 'I had...').

× I think bikes are not popular in my country in older people, but children.

✓ I think bikes are not popular among older people in my country, but they are popular among children.

The sentence mixes present tense with incorrect preposition and unclear structure. Use 'among' for groups ('among older people', 'among children') and supply the verb 'are' for the second clause to make the contrast clear. Maintain present simple ('I think', 'are') because the question asked generally about popularity. Suggestion: use parallel structure for contrast ('not popular among X, but popular among Y') and include the verb in both clauses.

× Every children have a box.

✓ Every child has a box.

'Every' requires a singular noun ('every child') and the verb must agree in singular ('has'). 'Children' is plural and cannot follow 'every'. Change 'children' to 'child' and 'have' to 'has' to fix subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: use 'every' + singular noun and singular verb (e.g., 'every student is', 'every person has').