Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct response (yes/no) with a brief supporting detail. Keep the answer natural, limit to 1–3 sentences, and use correct grammar.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that I used to ride around the neighborhood every afternoon with my friends.

提案: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and could be more specific. Remove filler words (e.g., "Umm"), fix subject-verb agreement, and add a brief specific reason or example. Use a linking word for coherence and keep it within 2–4 sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people commute by bicycle in cities because it is cheaper and helps reduce air pollution, so cycling is a common choice for daily travel.

× Umm yes, bikes are quite popular in our country and I would say that most of the people in our country loves to use bike instead of using cars to avoid pollution.

✓ Umm yes, bikes are quite popular in our country and I would say that most people in our country love to use bikes instead of cars to avoid pollution.

The main issues are subject-verb agreement (third person singular) and plural/singular noun forms. 'Most of the people... loves' is incorrect because 'most people' is treated as a plural subject, so the verb should be 'love' (not 'loves') — this is a third person plural subject-verb agreement error. Also, 'use bike' and 'using cars' are inconsistent: 'bike' should be plural as a general noun ('use bikes') and 'using cars' is wordy; use 'instead of cars.' Suggestion: use 'most people' (omit 'of' for naturalness), pair it with the plural verb 'love', and make nouns plural when speaking generally ('bikes', 'cars').