Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid unnecessary phrases like “It's very good question” or “Thanks for giving me an opportunity.” Use correct grammar (articles, verb forms) and natural word order.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one at the time, so I usually walked to school or used public transport. I remember feeling a bit envious when my friends rode around the neighborhood.

提案: Answer directly, then give specific reasons or examples. Use correct subject-verb agreement and sentence structure. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to connect ideas. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like “in their my country.”

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many students and workers use bicycles to commute to school or local markets. However, many riders do not have a proper license, which sometimes causes traffic safety problems.

× It's very good question.

✓ It's a very good question.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before singular countable noun 'question'. Use 'a' for one non-specific item. Suggestion: include 'a' when describing one countable noun ('a question').

× Thanks for giving me a opportunity.

✓ Thanks for giving me an opportunity.

The word 'opportunity' is a singular countable noun and requires the article 'an' before it. Also use 'an' before vowel sounds. Suggestion: write 'an opportunity'.

× To speak that I did not have any bike in my childhood.

✓ To be honest, I did not have a bike in my childhood.

Sentence is ungrammatical and awkward. 'To speak that' is incorrect; use 'to be honest' or 'speaking generally'. Also 'any bike' should be 'a bike' for a single countable item in a negative past context. Suggestion: use complete clause with subject and verb and correct article: 'I did not have a bike'.

× Yes, bikes is popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

Subject 'bikes' is plural and requires plural verb 'are' not 'is'. Ensure verb agrees in number with subject. Suggestion: use 'are' with plural nouns.

× There are many people use bike in their my country don't have any license.

✓ Many people in my country use bikes and don't have any license.

Original sentence has incorrect word order and pronoun use ('their my country') and lacks plural agreement for 'bike'. Also combines clauses poorly. Correct structure: place locative phrase 'in my country' after subject, use plural 'bikes', and connect clauses with 'and'. Suggestion: 'Many people in my country use bikes and don't have any license.'