Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct and clear. Start with a short topic sentence answering the question, then add 1–2 supporting details (where, how often, or who with). Avoid contradictory phrases and unnecessary words. Use simple linking words like 'but' or 'however' if you correct yourself. Keep your response under five sentences.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I lived in a small city and my family used public transport, so I only occasionally borrowed bikes from neighbors. However, I learned to ride one when I was a teenager at a park near my house.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and then expand with specific reasons or examples. Replace filler words like 'umm' with brief pauses and add 1–2 linked details using words such as 'because', 'for example' or 'so'. Keep it natural and avoid abrupt endings.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to markets or schools, and some cities have dedicated bike lanes which encourages cycling.

× Yes, I did that.

✓ Yes, I did.

The student added the pronoun 'that' unnecessarily. The response should be a short answer using the auxiliary 'did' to indicate past possession (Did you have a bike?) so 'Yes, I did.' is correct. Remove 'that' to match common short-answer structure.

× Actually, no, I didn't tap a bike when I was a child.

✓ Actually, no, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The verb 'tap' is incorrect in this context. The question asks about possession in the past, so the correct verb is 'have' and the negative past simple uses 'didn't have.' Replace 'tap' with 'have' to convey the intended meaning.

× Umm, yes, it is popular in my country.

✓ Umm, yes, they are popular in my country.

The question asked about 'bikes' (plural). Using 'it' (singular) mismatches the plural subject. Use the plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are' to agree with 'bikes.'