Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap daha doğal ve doğru dilbilgisi ile verilmelidir. Cümleleri net kurun, zaman uyumuna dikkat edin ve gereksiz duraksamalardan kaçının. Örneğin: - Doğru nesneyi kullanın (bike değil bag). - Geçmiş zaman kullanın ve yaş veya zaman belirleyici ekleyin: "When I was six" veya "about six years ago." - Tek bir ana fikir verin ve 1-2 destekleyici detay ekleyin. - Gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgulardan (uh, um) kaçının.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I remember getting it when I was about six, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon.

提案: Cevap açık ama daha düzenli ve akıcı olabilir. Bağlaçlar ve daha spesifik nedenler ekleyin; dilbilgisi ve kelime sırasına dikkat edin. Örneğin: - Kullanacağınız zaman ifadelerini netleştirin: "In the past" veya "recently". - Nedenlerini belirtin (trafik, altyapı, hava). - Gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın ve tek cümlede bir fikri işleyin. - Daha doğal bağlantı sözcükleri kullanın (however, because, therefore).

例: I think bikes used to be quite popular in the past, but not so much anymore. Nowadays many people prefer cars or buses because cities have grown, traffic has increased and there is less safe cycling infrastructure.

× Yes, I had a bag when I'm a child, if I'm not wrong.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, if I'm not wrong.

The student used the present tense pronoun and verb 'I'm' which is incorrect for a past-time reference; also 'bag' seems to be a lexical error given the question about a bike. Use past tense 'I was' for 'when I was a child' and correct the noun to 'bike' to match the question. Suggestion: use 'I was' for past time clauses and ensure noun matches context.'

× Uh, I think it's six years ago.

✓ Uh, I think it was six years ago.

The clause refers to a past time ('six years ago') so use past tense 'was' instead of present 'is'. Suggestion: when mentioning a specific time in the past, use past tense verbs (e.g., 'it was', 'I bought it').

× Uh, it's, uh, we.

✓ Uh, it belonged to me.

The original fragment 'it's, uh, we' is ungrammatical and unclear. The student likely intended to say the bike belonged to them; use a clear past-tense possession structure like 'it belonged to me' or 'we had one' depending on meaning. Suggestion: form complete clauses with subject and verb and avoid fragments.'

× In the past years I think bikes are very popular in my country, but nowadays I don't think so.

✓ In past years I think bikes were very popular in my country, but nowadays I don't think so.

The contrast uses past versus present. The clause describing past popularity should use past tense 'were' not present 'are'. Suggestion: when contrasting past and present, keep verbs in appropriate tenses ('were' for past, 'are' for present).

× The bikes are not popular and now they people use cars or bus, they don't use bikes.

✓ Bikes are not popular now; people use cars or buses and don't use bikes.

Errors: 'they people' is incorrect word order and extra pronoun; 'bus' should be plural 'buses' to match 'cars' in general statement. Also word order and redundancy corrected. Suggestion: use 'people' without an extra pronoun, pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally, and combine clauses smoothly (e.g., 'people use cars or buses and don't use bikes').'