Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện: Trả lời nên ở thì quá khứ (had), cung cấp câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ để tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ: nêu loại xe, ai tặng/đi chơi với ai, hoặc bạn đã dùng nó như thế nào. Hạn chế dùng một câu ngắn; mở rộng tối đa 3 câu phụ nữa và dùng liên từ nếu cần.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend with my older brother.

提案: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần rõ ràng và dùng ngôn ngữ chính xác (use plural, say ‘not very popular’). Thêm một câu giải thích cụ thể với lý do, ví dụ về giao thông, văn hóa hoặc hạ tầng. Dùng liên từ như ‘because’, ‘for example’, hoặc ‘however’ để kết nối ý và tránh câu quá ngắn.

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer motorbikes for their speed and convenience. For example, busy roads and long distances make bicycles less practical for daily commuting.

× Yes, I have one.

✓ Yes, I had one.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past tense. The student's response should also use past tense to match the timeframe. Use 'had' (past form of 'have') instead of 'have'. Suggestion: When answering past-tense questions, change present verbs to their past forms (e.g., 'I had', 'I went').

× I think it's not popular because almost people use motorbike.

✓ I don't think they are very popular because most people use motorbikes.

The examiner asks a general question about current popularity, but the student's sentence has several issues: 'I think it's not popular' uses contraction and singular 'it' incorrectly for plural 'bikes' and mixes present simple negatives awkwardly. 'Almost people' is incorrect; use 'most people'. 'Motorbike' should be plural 'motorbikes' to match 'people'. Also subject-verb agreement and article usage require 'they are' for 'bikes'. Suggestion: Use 'I don't think they are very popular because most people use motorbikes.' or 'I think bikes are not very popular because most people use motorbikes.'