Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a more informative, natural response: start with a clear topic sentence then add one or two brief supporting details (when, what kind, who you rode with, or a short memory). Keep it concise (max 5 sentences) and use linking words if you add details.

例: Yes — I had a red bicycle when I was about seven. I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood with my friends, which helped me learn balance and independence.

提案: Make the answer more natural and avoid repetition. Start with a clear opinion, then give two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because / also). Use varied vocabulary (e.g., common, widespread, cycling infrastructure).

例: Yes, cycling is very popular in my country. This is because we have many mountain-bike trails and scenic coastal roads, and there are also dedicated bike lanes in many cities that make riding convenient and safe.

× Yes, I think bikes are very popular in this country, in my country, because there's plenty of mountain bike tracks to go around, plenty of roads right by the coast.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in this country, in my country, because there are plenty of mountain bike tracks to go around and plenty of roads right by the coast.

The error involves 'there's' used before a plural noun phrase 'plenty of mountain bike tracks'. 'There is' (there's) is singular and should be 'there are' for plural subjects. Join the two coordinated noun phrases with 'and' for smoother sentence structure. Suggestion: use 'there are' with plural nouns and connect items with 'and' to improve clarity.