Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cần trả lời trực tiếp hơn và mở rộng câu trả lời bằng các chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: lý do, hoàn cảnh, cảm xúc, so sánh). Sử dụng liên từ để nối ý và tránh trả lời quá ngắn. Ví dụ cấu trúc: câu chủ đề + lý do/chi tiết + ví dụ hoặc hậu quả.

例: No, I didn't. My family couldn't afford a bike when I was young, so I usually walked to school instead. Because of that, I became quite used to long walks, although I sometimes felt envious of friends who could ride to the park.

提案: Cần phát triển câu trả lời bằng cách nêu lý do cụ thể, đưa ví dụ và so sánh. Sử dụng liên từ (for example, because, therefore) để làm rõ ý và thêm 2–3 câu hỗ trợ để phù hợp với độ dài tối đa 5 câu.

例: Yes, I do. Bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you often see commuters riding to work, and in rural areas families use bikes for errands, which helps reduce traffic and pollution.

× No, I didn't.

✓ No, I didn't.

The sentence 'No, I didn't.' correctly answers the past simple question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?'. It uses the appropriate auxiliary 'did' and negative contraction 'didn't' for past tense. No correction needed.

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I do.

The sentence 'Yes, I do.' correctly answers the present simple question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'. It uses the auxiliary 'do' for present simple questions and is grammatically correct. No correction needed.