Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer simply repeated the examiner's question instead of responding. Give a clear direct answer (yes/no) with a brief topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Keep it natural and limit to up to 5 sentences. Use linking words (for example, because, so, when) to make it coherent.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon. Because the streets were quiet then, I felt confident learning new tricks, and my parents often watched me practice.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and is short on specific details. Improve by correcting grammar (people like), adding a reason and an example, and using linking words to connect ideas. Aim for 2–4 sentences with specific context (cities, commuting, leisure) to show depth.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, in big cities many people cycle to work or to the market, while in smaller towns families often ride bikes for leisure on weekends.

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country. People likes to move around either by walk or by bicycle.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country. People like to move around either on foot or by bicycle.

The verb 'likes' is incorrect because the subject 'People' is plural and requires the base form 'like' (subject-verb agreement / third person plural). Also, the phrase 'by walk' is unidiomatic; use 'on foot' to describe walking. The conjunction 'either...or' is fine, but the preposition with 'bicycle' is 'by bicycle' while for walking the correct expression is 'on foot'. Suggestion: change 'likes' to 'like' and replace 'by walk' with 'on foot' to make the sentence grammatically correct and natural.