Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar and sentence structure: begin with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb forms and articles, and keep it concise (no more than 5 sentences). Add one supporting detail linked with a connector. For example, use past tense consistently ('loved', 'rode') and correct gerunds/infinitives ('to ride' or 'riding').

例: Yes. I had a pink bike that my dad bought me for my third birthday. I loved riding it around the park, and I often practiced balancing without training wheels. Because I enjoyed it so much, I remember learning to ride confidently within a few weeks.

提案: Make your opinion direct, use correct subject-verb agreement, and provide a specific reason with a linking word. Replace vague phrases with concrete examples (commuting, exercise, leisure) and use plural/pronoun agreement ('people love riding them').

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and recreation. For instance, families often ride to local parks on weekends, and students commonly cycle to school to save time and money.

× When I was three my dad bought me a pink bike as my birthday present and I love to riding it play around into the park.

✓ When I was three my dad bought me a pink bike as a birthday present and I loved riding it to play around in the park.

Errors: 'love' should be past tense 'loved' to match past timeframe set by 'When I was three' and 'bought' (past tense). 'to riding' is incorrect form after 'loved' — use the gerund 'riding' without 'to' or use 'to ride' with base verb; here 'loved riding' is natural. 'play around into the park' has wrong preposition 'into' and wrong structure — use 'to play around in the park' or 'to play in the park'. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent (use past for past events), remove unnecessary 'to' before gerund, and use correct preposition 'in' for location.

× From my perspective, bikes are popular in my country because people loves riding it to the park and playing games with friends.

✓ From my perspective, bikes are popular in my country because people love riding them to the park and playing games with friends.

Errors: 'people loves' is incorrect because 'people' is plural and requires the base verb 'love' (no -s). 'riding it' uses singular pronoun 'it' to refer to 'bikes' (plural); use 'them'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement by matching plural subjects with the base verb form, and use plural pronouns to match plural nouns.