Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear, does not respond to the question, and contains fragmented words. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no or short statement), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep responses natural, concise (max 5 sentences), and use relevant vocabulary (e.g., owned, borrowed, rode, neighborhood).

例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I received it as a birthday gift when I was seven, and I used to ride it every day around my neighborhood. Because of that, I became more confident and independent, and I learned to balance quickly. Occasionally I also borrowed bikes from friends when I wanted a different style.

提案: Your answer is vague and unintelligible. Start with a clear opinion (Yes/No/I think so) and then support it with specific reasons and examples using linking words (for example, because, therefore, moreover). Mention contexts where bikes are popular (commuting, recreation, sports) and any trends or comparisons. Keep it natural and concise.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute short distances. For example, students and office workers often cycle to avoid traffic and save money. Moreover, cycling clubs and weekend group rides have grown recently, which shows a rising interest in biking as a hobby.

× Do you have a bike renewal? Because.

✓ No, I don't. I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The original response is fragmentary and does not answer the examiner's past-tense question. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The examiner asked 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' which requires a past-tense answer. The student wrote an unclear present-tense fragment 'Do you have a bike renewal? Because.' Correct by providing a full past-tense sentence: use 'I didn't have a bike' to answer negatively, and include 'when I was a child' to match the question. Suggestion: form complete sentences that match the question's tense and avoid fragments.

× Positive into considering it, MMM. The bullets, MMM.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips and exercise.

The original reply is incoherent and fragmentary, lacking verbs and clear structure, so it is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The examiner asked 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' A proper response should be a complete sentence stating an opinion in the present tense: 'I think bikes are quite popular.' Add supporting details like 'many people use them for short trips and exercise.' Suggestion: answer directly, use clear subject and verb, and provide brief reasons or examples.