Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response repeats the examiner's question and gives no personal answer, content, or supporting details. To improve, answer directly with a short topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (where, who gave it to you, how you used it) using a linking word such as "because" or "so." Keep it natural and avoid repetition; aim for 1–3 sentences total.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my sixth birthday, and I often rode it to the nearby park because it was a safe place to practice.

提案: Your answer does not address the examiner's question and instead repeats or mangles an earlier question. To improve, state your opinion clearly (yes or no), then give specific reasons or examples (e.g., use for commuting, leisure, infrastructure) linked with words like "because", "for example", or "however." Limit to up to three sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, cities have bike lanes and rental schemes, so cycling is a convenient and affordable option for many residents.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child? Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's response repeats the examiner's question and lacks a proper answer. This is a sentence structure error because there is no clear subject-verb statement answering the question. Use past simple 'had' to match 'were a child'. Suggestion: give a concise affirmative or negative answer and add a brief detail (e.g. 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was small and pink.').

× Did you have a bike when you were a child? Did you have a bike when you were at?

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply repeats the question and ends with an incomplete phrase 'when you were at', which is ungrammatical. This is a sentence structure error and also results in a missing verb phrase in the clause. Use past simple negative 'didn't have' to match the past-time question. Suggestion: answer directly and avoid repeating the question; if giving extra detail, complete the clause (e.g. 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child; I learned to ride later.').