Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Correct the grammar and make the answer more natural and slightly more informative. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail. Avoid redundancy and keep it within 3–4 sentences. For example, use the simple past tense correctly: "Yes, I had a bike." Then add when or how you used it. Use a linking word if you add another detail (e.g., "and", "so").

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was growing up. I used it almost every day to visit friends and go to the park, and it helped me become more independent.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence and then add specific supporting details with a linking word to explain why you think that. Use a wider range of vocabulary (e.g., "common", "widely used") and be specific about contexts where bikes are popular (deliveries, commuting, leisure). Keep it concise and natural (2–3 sentences).

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially for delivery services. In many cities couriers use motorbikes and bicycles because they are cheap and can navigate traffic more easily.

× Yes I did had a bike when I was growing up.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was growing up.

The student used 'did had' which is incorrect because when forming a simple past affirmative sentence, the auxiliary 'did' is not used; instead the past form of the verb alone is used. Use 'I had' for correct past tense. Suggestion: say 'I had' for simple past statements and use 'Did you have...?' only for questions.

× Yes, bikes are usually used for deliveries here in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are usually used for deliveries in my country.

The original sentence is understandable but contains an unnecessary word 'here' that can be omitted for a more natural sentence. The present simple passive 'are used' is correct for habitual actions. Suggestion: remove redundant words and say 'in my country' rather than 'here in my country' for clarity and conciseness.