Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Start directly and give a full, natural response with a short topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Avoid extraneous words like “Hey, Cortana.” Use linking words if you add details and be specific (e.g., who you rode with, what kind of bike, and a memory). Keep it under five sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood when I was six. I often rode it with my older brother after school, which helped me gain confidence and balance quickly.

提案: Give a direct opinion, then support it with specific reasons or examples and use a linking word to connect points (e.g., because, for example, moreover). Mention who uses bikes, where they are used, or any trends to make the answer concrete. Stay within five sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, cities have dedicated bike lanes, and you can see students and office workers cycling to school or work. Moreover, cycling has become more common recently due to rising fuel prices and health awareness.

× Hey, Cortana, Yes.

✓ Yes, I did.

The student's reply 'Hey, Cortana, Yes.' is inappropriate for the examiner's question and misuses a proper noun/phrase instead of a subject pronoun and auxiliary. The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' requires a short past-tense answer using the auxiliary 'did' and a subject pronoun. Replace the phrase with 'Yes, I did.' to provide a grammatically correct, concise response in the past tense. Suggestion: Use 'I did' or 'No, I didn't' for short answers to past simple yes/no questions.

× Yes, bikes are popular in our country.

✓ Yes, bicycles are popular in my country.

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