Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваша реплика не отвечает на вопрос экзаменатора — вы просто повторили его слова. Это приводит к потере баллов за содержание и структуру. Дайте прямой ответ (например, «Yes, I did» или «No, I didn't»), затем добавьте 1–2 предложения с конкретными деталями (когда, с кем, какой велосипед), используя связки (for example, when, because) и не более 3 дополнительных предложений, чтобы оставаться естественным и эффективным.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, which I often rode with my older brother in the park. For example, we used to race each other every weekend, and those rides helped me become more confident on two wheels.

提案: Ответ даёт позицию, но он краткий и немного некорректный стилистически («more popular is a pit bike» звучит неестественно). Дайте чёткую оценку, затем поясните причину и приведите пример или сравнение. Используйте связки (however, because, for instance) и точные формулировки («more popular are pit bikes» или «pit bikes are more popular among young people»). Не больше 3–4 предложений всего.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular, but in recent years pit bikes have become especially trendy among young people. This is because they are affordable and easy to customise; for instance, many teenagers buy small pit bikes to ride around neighbourhoods or customise for shows.

× Yes, but I think that more popular is a pit bike.

✓ Yes, but I think pit bikes are more popular.

The original sentence uses an incorrect word order for comparative structure and mixes singular/plural forms. The correct English order is subject + verb + comparative complement: 'pit bikes are more popular.' Use plural 'pit bikes' to match the general statement about popularity and place the comparative phrase 'more popular' after the verb 'are.' Also omit the unnecessary filler 'that' in this sentence.