Bike— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
受験者
When I was five years old I got my first bike which had training wheels beside of it. But then later when I can ride the bike, will my parents take it the trainee wheels from the bike?
試験官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
受験者
When I was five years old I got my first bike which had training wheels. Later, when I could ride it confidently, my parents told the trainee woods off so I could learn to balance on my own.
評価
総合
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
スコア: 55.0提案: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question (e.g. “Yes, I did.”), then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb tenses (past simple for past events) and correct vocabulary (training wheels, take off). Link sentences with simple connectors (then, after that) to ensure coherence.
例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was five, and it had training wheels. After a few months, when I learned to balance, my parents took the training wheels off so I could ride by myself.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
スコア: 45.0提案: Answer the question directly and avoid repeating the same childhood story. Provide a clear opinion about bike popularity and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use appropriate vocabulary (popular, common, commuting, recreation) and correct grammar. Keep the response within 2–4 sentences and use linking words (for example, because, also).
例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips and exercise. For example, many people ride bicycles in parks or use them for commuting in smaller cities because traffic is heavy and cycling is cheaper than driving.
文法
× But then later when I can ride the bike, will my parents take it the trainee wheels from the bike?
✓ But then later, when I could ride the bike, my parents took the training wheels off the bike.
The sentence mixes present/future forms ('can', 'will') but the context is past. Use past modal/ability 'could' and past simple 'took'. Also 'trainee wheels' is incorrect word choice; the correct term is 'training wheels'. Preposition 'off' (not 'from') is standard with 'take off'. Suggestion: keep past tense throughout for past events: 'when I could... my parents took... off.'
× Later, when I could ride it confidently, my parents told the trainee woods off so I could learn to balance on my own.
✓ Later, when I could ride it confidently, my parents took the training wheels off so I could learn to balance on my own.
Several issues: 'told' is the wrong verb—use 'took' for removing something. 'Trainee woods' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'training wheels'. Also 'off' attaches to 'took' to indicate removal. Suggestion: use correct vocabulary 'training wheels' and collocate with 'took... off.'
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