Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

模試Part12026-08-23 23:14:09

会話

Part 1

試験官

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

受験者

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

試験官

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

受験者

Did you think bike are popular in your country?

評価

総合

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

スコア: 20.0

提案: 你的回答完全重复了考官的问题,未给出任何信息。要直接回答问题并补充一到两句具体细节,例如什么时候拥有,骑车的频率或与谁一起骑。保持自然、不冗长,最多5句,并使用连接词(例如: when, because, so)。

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was eight, and I rode it almost every day after school. My friends and I often cycled to the park because it was close to our neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

スコア: 25.0

提案: 你的回答错误地重复并且改变了时态,同样没有给出观点或理由。应直接表达观点并给出具体原因和例子,使用连接词(for example, because, however)使论述连贯。控制在5句以内。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them for short trips because they are cheap and convenient. For example, students and office workers often cycle to avoid traffic.

文法

Past tense issue

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

原句是考官问句的重复,學生直接复述考官的问题并不合适。根据题意,考生应以过去时作答。将“Did you have a bike when you were a child?” 改为肯定回答 “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.” 使用过去时动词 had 来与助动词 did 对应。建议:作答时根据问题使用对应时态,简单过去时的陈述句主语后直接用过去式动词(had)。

Present tense issue

× Did you think bike are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

学生句子存在多个问题:1) 时态不符合考官的现在时问句,应使用一般现在时,助动词用 do;2) 主谓不一致,名词 bike 应为复数或使用定冠词/the bike 来泛指,但此处询问普遍现象应用复数 bikes;3) 主谓一致中动词 be 要用复数形式 are 对应复数主语。综上,改为 “Do you think bikes are popular in your country?” 建议:遇到询问普遍现象时用一般现在时,主语为复数时谓语用复数形式;另外注意使用 do/does 开头的疑问句时主体动词用原形(think)。

重要語彙

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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