Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating the examiner's question and fix basic grammar (tense and articles). For example, state whether you had a bike, when you got it or how often you used it, and one brief reason or memory.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I received it as a birthday present when I was eight, and I used it almost every day to ride to my friend’s house. Because there were few buses in our neighborhood, the bike was my main way to get around.

提案: Start with a clear opinion, use correct sentence structure and vocabulary, and give specific supporting reasons with linking words (e.g., however, because, although). Correct factual or grammatical errors and avoid unclear words like ‘March’ or incomplete comparisons. Keep to 2–3 sentences total.

例: I think bikes are not very popular in my country, although they are used in some cities. This is because many people prefer cars due to long distances and limited cycling infrastructure, so car ownership is much higher.

× March actually bike was not that popular in my country, but yes car is more popular than my.

✓ Actually, bikes were not that popular in my country, but cars are more popular than motorcycles.

Multiple issues: incorrect word 'March' seems to be a typo and was removed; 'bike' and 'car' are singular/plural mismatch and need plural forms to refer generally (plural vs singular) — this is a singular and plural issue and subject reference issue, corrected by using 'bikes' and 'cars'; tense: the first clause refers to past general state, so use past plural 'were'; the second clause compares general present popularity, so use present plural 'are'; the phrase 'more popular than my' is incorrect pronoun use and unclear—replaced with 'more popular than motorcycles' to make the comparison explicit. Suggestion: check word choice for typos, match noun number to intended general meaning (use plural for general categories), ensure tense consistency for time frames, and use clear comparison objects (avoid 'my').